Sunday, November 23, 2008

Audience Approval, part 2 | November 23, 2008 at 7:34 p.m.

 

Note: This script may require editing to stay consistent with previous scripts.

 

TITLE

Audience Approval, part 2

 

SETTING

Illybrius's room

 

Sun, Nov 23, 2008;

7:34 PM

 

ORION

Damn her! I'll be back Pet.

 

EPIPHANY zaps Orion

 

FLUOU smacks Orion with the Grammar Hammer

 

ORION

This shouldn't take long. Promise.

 

EVRYN

Illybrius isn't even in the room!

 

EPIPHANY

[ I think he just likes getting zapped and whacked.]

 

[11 minutes]

 

ILLYBRIUS

I'm back.

 

ORION

I'm here. I'm back too Pet.

 

EPIPHANY zaps Orion

 

FLUOU smacks Orion with the Grammar Hammer

 

ILLYBRIUS

I think she tried to talk to me, but I wasn't able to hear.

 

ORION

Guess you want to know then.

 

ILLYBRIUS

I admit to a mild curiosity. What did she say?

 

ORION

She gave me your halberd. Said it was mine now. She thinks you just did the human terms of a divorce.

 

FLUOU smacks Orion with the Grammar Hammer

 

SIGYN AND DREPANON

DO YOU REALISE HOW MUCH PAPERWORK, TIME, AND FUCKING *BUREAUCRACY* THAT REQUIRES?!

 

DREPANON

...

 

SIGYN, looking a little pleased

...

 

DREPANON

Awkward.

 

EPIPHANY

[Your face is awkward.]

 

DREPANON

No, I'm just drawn that way.

 

CORRI

No, man, I've seen you. Your face really is awkward.

 

DREPANON

Impolite.

 

ORION

Where was the comma supposed to go?

 

FLUOU

That was for your shitty word structure.

 

ORION

But you didn't say...

 

FLUOU

Do I really have to explain the function of a punitive hammer?

 

ORION

But I don't understand!

 

FLUOU

That's not my problem.

 

EVRYN

I wonder how much Kibby gets hit with that thing?

 

FLUOU

He's actually quite eloquent when he's not on the show. Corri just writes his lines like an idiot.

 

ORION

But she writes my lines like an idiot, too!

 

FLUOU

Hey, good job, little buddy! You paused at the comma!

 

EVRYN

I think Corri's just a bad writer.

 

FLUOU

The actor should be smart enough to tell the difference between what's meant to be said and what's actually written. In Kibby's case, it doesn't bother me as much because he's a very minor character, but this asshole's on almost every episode.

 

ORION

So she left... And took your unborn son with her.

 

EVRYN

£5 says she miscarries again.

 

ALEX THE CUSTODIAN GUY

I'll take that bet.

 

ILLYBRIUS

...

She couldn't have bothered to confirm?

 

EPIPHANY

[Of course not. Acting rationally would prevent Corri from milking the situation for all the distress it's worth.]

 

ORION

I just found out. Apparently she asked Anubis the other night.

 

EVRYN

No, she asked an00b15.

 

ORION

He was testing her and told her that for you to talk with Maheone she had to give up her ability to bear childer.

 

EVRYN

Wait, wait, if she's getting a pregnancy test, then like, couldn't she just buy one at the drugstore?

 

META AND CIN

Those are both too mainstream and not 100% accurate

 

CIN

... Yeah, I see it. Super awkward.

 

FLUOU

I honestly don't see what having chillens has to do with Psycho talking to Maheone.

 

DREPANON

Audience One wasn't—

 

SIGYN

He didn't mean me.

 

EVRYN

Well, Maheone is a fertility god, but he's got nothing to do with Remirum.

 

OVD, warningly

Evryn...

 

EVRYN

Nothing whatsoever.

 

ORION

She agree but let her keep it knowing how much she wanted them.

 

FLUOU smacks Orion with the Grammar Hammer

 

ORION

You're just doing this because you like to!

 

FLUOU

Deal with it.

 

EPIPHANY

[So, in other words, there were no actual consequences to her actions, like always, and you only said that to freak out Illybrius for a bit because Corri feeds off other people's unhappiness?]

 

ORION

She said she was going to tell you tonight.

 

ILLYBRIUS

Then she should have told me tonight. I'm irked with these mind games. If she has something to say, she ought to say it; if she has a question, she ought to ask instead of assuming the worst.

 

ORION

Well it doesn't matter now.

 

EPIPHANY

[Translation: Corri doesn't want to deal with consequences.]

 

EVRYN

We should make her copy an essay.

 

SIGYN

Ughhh... I hated those fuckers.

 

CIN

Hello, when did YOU have to copy an essay ever?

 

SIGYN

I had to deal with YOU having a 2 and not being able to hang out while YOU copied them, and that's just as bad.

 

DREPANON

Wait, there's a continuity in which Audience One didn't get herself in trouble all the time?

 

CIN

Yes there's a cOnTiNuItY wHeRe AuDiEnCe OnE dIdN't GeT hErSeLf In TrOuBLe AlL tHe TiMe. It's called "Early FalconCanon circa 2003 - 2007," where *I* was the one getting MYself in trouble all the time. Also, can you please try not to say something that stupid ever again? My writer says Spongebob Chickening that took way too xlong.

 

DREPANON

... Anachronisms?

 

CIN

Go play with your soapbox, sweetheart.

 

DREPANON

Once again, please don't call me that. SHE calls me that.

 

CIN

I wasn't aware that Akuma ever— oh. You didn't mean her this time.

 

ORION

She said she would be back in a few months but you could still wirte to her. She's staying at the Dark Moon Keep.  She'll be safe there. No doubt you will want to challenge her for the chlide?

 

FLUOU smacks Orion with the Grammar Hammer

Did I mention that this doubles as a Word Usage Hammer?

 

ORION

The child!

 

ILLYBRIUS

I don't give a rat's squiggly pink tail.

 

ORION

Very well. It's not my place to get involved.

 

EPIPHANY

[Translation: Now Corri is getting all pissy and passive-aggressive because you didn't take the bait.]

 

ORION

She did keep Condemption and Redemption though. I feel nothing will happen.

 

EVRYN

I agree, but mostly because "condemption" isn't a word. Did you mean "condemnation"?

 

ORION

I don't believe in condoms, for this nation or any other.

 

EVRYN facepalms

Where does Corri get your weapon name ideas from, anyway? Devil May Cry?

 

FLUOU snaps dictionary shut and smacks Orion with the Grammar Hammer

 

FLUOU

I would not be surprised.

 

ILLYBRIUS

I. Don't. Care. Right now, you are here with me. I want to focus on you and me, and if Maheone's not hurt, then fuck the rest.

 

ORION

Of course.

 

EVRYN

Yeah, he'll do anything that moves! And some things that don't!

 

ILLYBRIUS

... Good. I th— wait, NO!

 

(BRRRING!)

 

*roll credits*

 

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